boisterous, sounds like boiling water.. no idea what i would replace it with, maybe relentless or (a stretch) oceanous? but i like the rest and i love the story it weaves, including cast-a-nets.. ships wreckless and trackless (sic mine). i thoroughly enjoyed it. thanks
it is interesting when i read a poem, i hear other words in place of the ones offered, and i am perplexed, to me that is a second level meaning by onomatopoeia or resonant rhyme in me. nevertheless, thanks for that poem!
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Date: 2016-08-12 05:47 pm (UTC)From:but i like the rest and i love the story it weaves, including cast-a-nets.. ships wreckless and trackless (sic mine). i thoroughly enjoyed it. thanks
it is interesting when i read a poem, i hear other words in place of the ones offered, and i am perplexed, to me that is a second level meaning by onomatopoeia or resonant rhyme in me. nevertheless, thanks for that poem!
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