
Good old Ozzy - totally get this as I felt the same whilst reading parts of my diss reread yesterday, but mostly it was about rewording. Today I will sort this out and then look at my checklist as I feel that some of the arguments could be stronger and maybe better sign posted.
More later.
21:22
OK, so I have reduced the word count down to 9,331 and will read Mock Up Part 2 tomorrow. I will also consider a few other essays and maybe some older classic texts, try to write a conclusion and create the inserts. As of tomorrow, I have nine days left. Getting closer, folks :-D